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Its my life..I just wrote it. Please give me some feedback.

  1. Jabiraj1
    Honeycomb Sep 23, 2014

    Jabiraj1 , Sep 23, 2014 :
    My primary language isnt english still i tried to write my difficult life as a shape of a poem , you guys tell me how is it i just wrote it.

    Some relations cant be named
    Some joys wont be tamed
    Some beauties aren't noticed,
    Some people won't be missed
    Some smile don't represent happiness,
    Some words don't make sense,
    Some expectations won't be true
    Some ideas wouldn't go through
    negativity is endless,my life is a mess
    I still have hopes and my dream never ends.
     

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  2. Silverchaoz
    Lollipop Sep 23, 2014


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  3. peteryu
    KitKat Sep 23, 2014

    peteryu , Sep 23, 2014 :
    hey it's my life too, op :p
     

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  4. firewire2035
    KitKat Sep 23, 2014

    firewire2035 , Sep 23, 2014 :
    sometimes when someone puts some idea on somewhere other than summerville, it's something else.
     

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  5. vineesh
    Ice Cream Sandwich Sep 23, 2014


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  6. jakele168
    Froyo Sep 23, 2014


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  7. avinashadvani
    Jelly Bean Sep 23, 2014


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  8. bubupa
    Froyo Sep 23, 2014


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